MysticShinHanKu's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bitches Ain't Shit Part 1]

Well it was ok.

I give you a decent score for animation. The animation was alright, but the voice acting really disappointed me. It wasn't the quality or the voices that were the problem. It was the acting itself. It wasn't very convincing, no offense to your actors. Like the paper bag part where it's yelling NOOOO that's a very funny joke, but it was a whispered yell...you should've had your actor yell it out like it was real. Much more realistic. I bet if you really had some great acting and superb voice acting quality, you probably could've got a daily winner, even front page. But that really dropped it for me :/ Also, I've never been a fan of subtitles, that's just me. Distracting, takes me away from the scene at hand. good luck, I'm sure you'll improve. Also, for future, you might not want to submit 2 parts of a series at the same time. You should submit 1, wait for it to catch a little then submit the second. People who like it will go back and find the first. Sorry for the long review :p Good luck

LichiMae responds:

Ya, like....7 voice actors flaked on me, so I ended up having to do most of them. And I know about the subs, but the audio's so bad that you need it. LOL.

Thanks for the comment. :3

[Commercials]

haha nice job

tomamoto makes the flash really. Voice acting really does pick a flash up. Like Ego's stuff, it's all about the jokes and comedy and voice acting. Great job, it was funny. the cell phone one was great. haha. Great job guys. There should've been more. I reeeally want to voice act for an entire flash, dammit! haha :p If you're thinking about more, I'll help you out!!! It's so much fun!

MetalDart responds:

Yeah, Tomamoto's voice is great.
Thanks for the great review!

[Color Test 2]

how about a full on animation?

don't make more tests, keep the tests to yourself or post them on the forums for critique. the portal is a place for full on animations. Why don't you make one? You're obviously good at fbf animation, that blood spatter and bouncing black ball were very well animated, it looked really good, but it was boring kinda. It was just random stuff. You should make a real flash, get yourself a good and creative and original script, some characters, voice actors if you need them, music, SFX, the works. you've got the animation part down, just fill in the blanks and you'll be well on your way to front page.

Maxaroni5 responds:

I've actually been working on one since march, but my voice actors haven't been in touch. so i can't finish it yet.

[SKATER V2 Episode: 02]

Excellent...

Once again, quite awesome. Even better than the first. We needs more skateboarding awesomeness though! Good luck! I gotta learn that zoom in/out effect! it's really great. good job.

MarcyVF responds:

Thanks!
In ep30 it will be a lot of skating.

[Metroid Prime Catastrophe]

Very nice

cool animation, good jokes, pretty funny, and so true haha. I do wish Samus had a metallic filter on her voice to enhance the feel of the suit, but it's not important. Great job!

Shadowii2 responds:

Thanks and yeah, her voice could have been little "robotic" but it was good enough without it already.

Nice you enjoyed.

[Break it!]

it was alright

but you shouldn't have to click to skip it. And you should make it a little bigger and with a preloader. good luck in the future!

Miren2k responds:

aw I didnt think it needed a pre loader because its so short and the whole thing wouldve loaded by the time you click the last text, thanks for the support though i dont think many people like clicking =\

[Halo: Orions Spartans I]

Sweet movie!

Great job on this, I really enjoyed it. I really like the opening monologue, that guy was my favorite character. The voice acting was pretty good, I wish I was a part of it. (if you need more voice actors contact me! Demo is on my userpage!) Your drawings were done very well. The Halo characters look awesome. I can't wait for this to progress I'm sure it will be epic. Good twist on the holographic attack, that was cool! Good luck on the rest of it!

Enzer0 responds:

This guys is following my story - Why cant the others?

[SKATER V2 Episode: 01]

Loved it great job

Very simple, yet entertaining. The sounds and animation were great. the art, although simple, was really cool and didn't get boring. Good job, keep up the style.

MarcyVF responds:

Thank you. Thank you.
I'll keep it up :P

[Avatar Boredom Dub 4]

Pretty good

I like these, very nice. syncs well with the lips. good job.

TomaMoto responds:

Thanks, Mystic.

[Spritey-Man!]

it was ok

it was fine, but the horrible song and blinking colors made me seizure...

Spritanium responds:

Ahahahaha