hmm...nice job
I don't think the previous poster knows what homophobic means...but anywho.
It was great, looked amazing, I loved that. The fight was very cool. Poor music choice for the fight though, and the dialogue part...well, I couldn't really remember the first part of episode 1, and you didn't have anything that would capture a new audience, you have to expect that people who haven't seen episode 1 at all or in a while will watch this. So you need to sum stuff up. the part with the news reporters was strange, and the girly reporter was very quiet, so I couldn't understand them, and what they were talking about was confusing, and also kinda boring. But it was a beautiful flash.
you just need to work on your excitement levels and dialogue. good luck