it was alright
I have to agree almost completely with Hoogiman. The art was very nice with the gradients and very detailed characters. The tweened animation was pretty good the way you did it, so they weren't standing still as they talked, but the dialogue just didn't do a whole lot for me.
I felt the writing was a little weak and none of the jokes hit. One rule of comedy - repetition is funny....but to a certain point. The mommy joke died in the first scene, you shouldn't have kept going.
Also, like said, the dialogue just wasn't delivered strong enough to make the impact it needed. Samus especially just didn't do a lot for me. The touching my boobs line wasn't a favorite of mine, but the way she delivered it made it worse for me. There should've been a build up, and a little faster. I would've liked to hear a little more attitude out of her voice actor.
All in all, a very nicely made animation, it is good, but the actual plot/script/performance needs to be worked on because you are a good animator. Good luck on your next project! Maybe I'll be able to voice work for you sometime.