MysticShinHanKu's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Nightwalking]

great animation..but..

no audio and no color dropped the interest for me. Some SFX, music would've made this much more enjoyable. when she hit him with the dog then kicked him would've been much funnier and cooler if there were audio and color. I bet if you redid it with color and audio you'd do really well.

Slackman responds:

Well, I'm sorry about the lack of audio and color, but I couldn't find any music I thought complimented it all that well, and I didn't have time to do it in color. My next short will have audio and color. Thanks for the help though!

[HALOMEN2 Preview]

Saaweet.

Awesome job. the art is really great, movement is nice and smooth. Good job!

[Orlando's Joint #9]

not bad

it started a little slow for my taste. I like much quicker humor, so that's just me. the animation was good, but they did have white tongues :p You should've colored them lol. Nice job

[Kiddo & Hurly]

hm...needs a lot of work

characters need to be completely re done..they are just shapes. Add better voice acting, better animation, better plot, a replay button or at least not have it loop. It just wasn't very good at all.

[Platformation]

pretty good

pretty entertaining for a stick flash, actually. the best parts were the teleporting people. I liked how there were so many people that died without a fight, they just fell :p Nice. you're good at fbf, think about putting that to use and really going for an awesome, fully-animated flash. Good luck

[Bitches Ain't Shit Part 2]

Very nice

This was an improvement in my opinion. Even though they were made together :p I kinda liked a lot of this one more. You should export your audio at a higher quality to make it sound much better, but that wasn't a big deal. (I was recommended 64 kbps and it sounds great is pretty good with file size) The Foster's ref was funny. Though I didn't really like that you directly quoted Waiting with 2 types of girls. If you use someone's joke you need to immediately make it known that it wasn't yours in my opinion. It was funny yes, but if someone hasn't seen waiting, the ref is gone. It was a quote, not a reference, but again, no biggie. I liked the character, a lot of it was real. The loss of voice actor sound for the girl when he cuts her off, that was a funny bit. I'm sure it inconvenienced you but it was funny.

congrats on the awards, I'm sure you'll improve on your next movies or episodes for this series? Good luck.

LichiMae responds:

I know, I was trying to figure out how to do the Waiting quote...I should've drawn the background as the restaurant, and dressed him as a waiter for that part...

And like 7 voice actors bailed....this whole project was one problem after another. :<

And it's the mic, not the KBPS, cuz it's at 128. :B

Thanks for the comment though, I hope that I improve everything by the next one. LOL

[TANKMEN 2]

fuckin..

haha loved it! So convenient that the tribute, Halomen, came out right before it. It was basically an opening act. Great job! Loved it!

[Bitches Ain't Shit Part 1]

Well it was ok.

I give you a decent score for animation. The animation was alright, but the voice acting really disappointed me. It wasn't the quality or the voices that were the problem. It was the acting itself. It wasn't very convincing, no offense to your actors. Like the paper bag part where it's yelling NOOOO that's a very funny joke, but it was a whispered yell...you should've had your actor yell it out like it was real. Much more realistic. I bet if you really had some great acting and superb voice acting quality, you probably could've got a daily winner, even front page. But that really dropped it for me :/ Also, I've never been a fan of subtitles, that's just me. Distracting, takes me away from the scene at hand. good luck, I'm sure you'll improve. Also, for future, you might not want to submit 2 parts of a series at the same time. You should submit 1, wait for it to catch a little then submit the second. People who like it will go back and find the first. Sorry for the long review :p Good luck

LichiMae responds:

Ya, like....7 voice actors flaked on me, so I ended up having to do most of them. And I know about the subs, but the audio's so bad that you need it. LOL.

Thanks for the comment. :3

[My Girl]

it was ok

it was very slow paced. You should've used some more frames or a faster frame rate. I got a little bored and the voices were very low, and muffled. If you're using voice acting, I've heard it's best to export audio at 64 kbps. Nice animating, it was alright. Good though, I'm sure you can improve.