hahaha
my friend showed me that song a couple of years ago...I'm glad I found this haha. it's so good
hahaha
my friend showed me that song a couple of years ago...I'm glad I found this haha. it's so good
I dont like a lot of sprite flashes
but you did very well. I liked it a lot. The fight scenes were obviously very well thought through. The running down the mountain at a vertical angle was awesome and all the blasts and cool combos. Very nice. I would like to see some change of perspective, but that was really good. it was funny how they ran because they galloped :p haha. Good job, continue it. Very well done. Great effort with placing sound effects, jokes, and everything.
not bad
not wonderful, but I did like the character models. Interested to see them animated more. Good luck.
agreed
I agree that it looks dumb when they fall. It's a very flat animation. Not enough SFX and the music is pretty boring. I like really energetic madness flashes and this has room to be really hilariously violent, but I don't think you really captured it. I wasn't extremely impressed, but interesting concept.
The music and sfx are ment to be like that, following the trend of madness apothisis
you amaze me
You have a true talent. man...you are awesome. I really want to see more of this stuff. It was great. Good luck on your next project. Nothing more to say, it was perfect!!
a little odd
but I didn't blam it. Didn't hate it, didn't love it. Art was alright, animation was pretty good, the walking at the end was a little eh, but that's cool. not bad
um...
why didn't you wait and submit it when it was done. It wasn't that great. The lip syncing wasn't that great of a tutorial, not the best examples of mouth types, and "ha ha" isn't much of a line of dialogue. You should improve on the rest of it because right now it doesn't have much.
that was awesome...but
that was really really great, some great art and animation even pretty good story which is rare, buuut it was almost completely silent, no background music, and I can't believe you didn't have voice acting! I'm sure this will do welll, but pleease put voice acting in the second episode, you really need to, seriously. If you need voice actors, you can go to
www.voiceactingclub.com and post yourself an audition with character lines and voice types. Take that advice, we at the VAC work on newgrounds flashes all the time. It'll really improve your flashes. It was great, but the silence was killin' me.
Thanks for the tip. At one point, I was going to add voices, but the problem was I couldn't find someone would work cheap enough or wasn't godawful. But thanks for the heads up on www.voiceactingclub.com. This may have solved my problem.
Interested in using me as a voice actor? Email me at coreyhollandcomedy@gmail.com. Check my favorites list for stuff I've voiced in (obviously not all of them :p)
Age 36, Male
Voice Actor/Comedian
Los Angeles
Joined on 2/24/07