pretty cool
very cool images and artwork, interesting story, but I was really put off by the massive amounts of tweening. Everything tweened. When she was turning her head back and forth, it looked really weird and turned me off a lot. The movements were very odd looking most of the time.
the story itself was cool, but was very slow moving, it needed some pace and something with high energy that would entice the audience more. While it was very cool, there were times when I became very bored. Maybe you could have split it into parts since 14 minutes is a very long time for a flash movie, especially one without a scene selection. The look was there, but it needed life - tweens take so much away from a flash. The characters had no emotion in their faces and bodies, no life. Good luck on future submissions.