MysticShinHanKu's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Senioritis]

well...it was funny

but the fact that you ripped 70% of your jokes off other stuff really lets me down. It's one thing being inspired, buuut it's another thing directly quoting. You did this in Bitches Ain't Shit with the Waiting quote, and don't credit Waiting.

The women's rights, fingers thing, mickey mouse cartoon part, twin part, almost everything that was meant to be funny was almost a direct quote or copied from another show or movie. Just said, really. You're not bad at art, most of the animation was pretty good, could use some work, but the writing needs serious work. Originality is necessary...hardcore. Audio quality was pretty bad, and the voice acting was mostly ok, but when he yells, I don't like when you whisper it, volume is very important.

the thing that bugs me most is that you took so many jokes and didn't credit or even have an "inspired by" section :(

[why do you cry]

not bad

good visuals. I would've liked some more movement, but it was ok. I didn't get the message until you spelled it out in the end. It just wasn't very obvious.

the text in the end was very dark, hard to read, and didn't run smoothly. It looked thrown together and too informal like you were just talking. Needs a more professional appeal, but overall it was an alright project. nice job

Jestercap13 responds:

thanx yeah im not so keen on movement but whatever and the message i couldnt think of ways of showing whith out telling and have it fit the story but oh well

[Eternalgam3r's Newgrounds]

eh it was ok

visuals were ok. They were smooth and consistent. Showed some good non-n00bish qualities. The voice was a little annoying, but it was less annoying than the ones in the clockcrew ones. It was ok...I'll let it slide.

I have it a 2/5

ETERNALGAM3R responds:

Non-n00bish qualities eh? Why thanks, I've only been using flash for a couple of months. I agree with you about the annoying voice and that it is better than the clockcrew's. I always hated theirs. Thanks for the silde.

[The English Paper]

Give him Daily Feature!

You needed nothing but the music. The animation was smooth, no vid game parodies but you still reached everyone. I connected with this like nooooo other. 2:30-3 am is a great time for essays!! The AIM thing was spot on. Every high school and college student can relate to this great job.

Those colored cuts were great, I love those different color silhouettes great job. It was awesome. And the ending was perfect. The stars and Freebird starts up at the best part? FREEBIIIRD! Great job, seriously. That took some thought and you did this very well. Talent!

[Worm Story]

whoooa

Your backgrounds were on par with Adam Phillips stuff. Very visually appealing. Awesome job. The daily feature is much deserved.

[TT: 001 Rabbits]

Wooow!!

That was so colorful, cute and fun! You guys sang that??? Awwwesome! I really want to see more. :)

TommyVF responds:

Haha! Thanks!
Yes, we sang that, but we made the whole song lighter, so we're not actually that "light-voiced"!
We will make more, and maybe we'll ask you for some voice acting?

>TM.

[JermzDR]

cool!

very intriguing. I'm interested now.